Ghost Network 01-005

February 5th, 2017, 2:29 pm

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Reply oh-no-melon, February 5th, 2017, 2:35 pm

They're calling for snow tonight! I can hardly believe it; we were having such nice weather and now snow! Don't get me wrong, I like the snow but I was just starting to thaw out.
We're going to start seeing more characters soon here in Ghost Network... I might need to do a character guide. We get introduced to quite a few very quickly! Don't want to cause any confusion for anyone.

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Reply Grellk, March 19th, 2017, 12:04 am

@oh-no-melon: maybe when you introduce a character you should show flashbacks of how they met and how they know each other, and while youre at it you can let the main character describe what they thought of them now and then.

Reply oh-no-melon, March 19th, 2017, 4:08 pm

@Grellk: The flashback idea might work for some of the characters actually! But as for internal dialogue, I try to limit that because I have two official main characters and the sub characters do have their moments of being 'main' so I don't want to cause any confusion. I try to write it so that internal dialogue isn't necessary but I'm still playing with format! Whatever will work best in telling the story is what I'll do so that might happen as well!

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